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Part two of this little ongoing comic. I actually finished redrawing the last page yesterday, and oh gosh, that took 9 hours. But then again I cant blame anyone because I got so easily distracted by youtube.

Anyway, I hope this makes more sense now. And I hope you all enjoy. The next page will be up tomorrow

I'm also sorry if there are mistakes in the grammar here too D: I got help with the last 4 panels though
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Given 2012-12-15
Tori's 4 page-comic is definitely a must read. You can really see how one emotion and feelings shift from one to another, giving the readers an excitement on what will happen next. Now can you handle the twist at the end? b - 2 by `dust-bite (be sure to check the 1st page first!) ( Featured by jcroxas )
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sonefire Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aww!i like it
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Naiko-Morei Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very interesting :) I love it
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Hahli1994 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She is missing those two strands of hair on the third panel I noticed
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, I meant to go back on these a little, never really had the time c: Thanks for pointing it out~
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Silent996 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
First frame looks really odd.
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ok.
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gaara45445 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Another fallen solider, moment of silence for our comic brother.
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Cyane-ei Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thumbs up w
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yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student
aww couples!!
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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IcEsCissORs Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww Torri I am starting to like this
good job
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aprilclash Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eyebrows...I like em lol
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
EYEBROW MONSTER
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aprilclash Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The original lol
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TouchedVenus Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This is so cute so far. I'm really forward to the next page. :D
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you c:
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TouchedVenus Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome! :D
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Dandykeen Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is interesting! I can't wait for the next!
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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SomeOne97 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
It's really awesome you upload so fast :) how many parts are there? :)
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm not really uploading fast lol They've been done for a while now. There are 4 parts, the last will be on Halloween.
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SomeOne97 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I know I know. It's just nice we don't have to wait too long. Too bad it's so short.
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If I had the time to make it longer, I would have ;u; It was a fun story to work on~
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SomeOne97 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
too bad awesome people don't have enough time ;u; It is also fun to read :)
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aha-mccoy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
this page is pretty nice. and happy. hehe you drew them very well. nice job
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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aha-mccoy Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
welcome ^^
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NIELSPETERDEJONG Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Aww! So cute! ^_^

And does this mean you will continue the comic? :)
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Which comic, this one? It's already done, just need two more days to put it up lol
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LaCerezaHada Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
This is looks sweet. c:
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dust-bite Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~
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